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olive1818
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Hello, I'm olive1818, and I have been reading the creative writing in The Whyville Times. A lot of the writing was inspiring to me, and I thought I should try to write one to submit for myself. Soo, here it is! (By the way, it is about a break up I suffered. I thought a lot of girls around my age could relate to it because sometimes breakups are difficult to get through.)

Taking in all of the emotion . . .
All of the exhaustion . . .
All of the hate . . .

He told me he loved me . . .
He dragged me on forever . . .
But as it ended, for me, it was too late . . .

How could he do this to me?
How could he lie?
For all that I have done . . .
All I can do now, is cry.

Time is seeming to stop, as I try to remember . . .
Everything about him
I knew everything . . . about him . . .
Now, I'd rather die . . .

Did he even love me?
Did he even care?
Though, all I can do now, is cry . . .

 

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