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The Caves of Hawaii: A Beautiful Story

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I had an extraordinary day, an awesome experience. I went exploring in the damp caves of Hawaii today.

The roaring of the waves sent a shiver down my spine. I put my hands upon the walls of gold. I slowly lifted my hands off the wall; it was damp and absorbing the water.

I recall the sound of the water softly rippling down the cave floor. The regardless whispers of the wind calling my name....

I gripped ahold of a glimmering rock, shimmering by the only light leaking through a hold in the cave. I slipped the rock into my pocket.

It was the coolest trip ever.

 

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