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Breakaway

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Have you ever just wanted to breakaway

To get away from all your problems
From all the chaos of the world

When everything's going wrong
And nothing's going right

You try to be kind
But people just put you down

How you long to just leave them behind
But you can't

They're like heavy burdens you can never release
No matter how hard you try

You pray day and night that things will get better
But they never do

How you just wish to breakaway

To spread your wings and fly away
But yet you can't

You are only a human
With no wings at all
And everyone seems to remind you of it

You want to breakaway
But the people around won't let you

You try and try to fight everything
But you can't

You're just too weak
You can't do it

You want to breakaway from all your problems
But the people around won't let you

Even your friends seem to hold you back

Everyone tells you that you'll fail
That you'll never be able to achieve anything
And you just want to breakaway from all that

After all who could blame you
You're being hurt and abused on the inside
And no one seems to care

They see you as a fool
A fool who thinks they can leave all their problems behind

Everyone seems to be putting pressure on you
Even the people you thought loved you

You just want to breakaway from everything
The negative things
And the positive

All remarks just seem to make you want to breakaway even more

It seems as if every positive remark has a negative remark with it

You just want to breakaway
But no one seems to be helping
All they do is make you more sure of what you've decided

You want to breakaway
But no one wants to help
So you're on your own

You've decided that you're going to breakaway no matter what
All your problems will leave
And you'll finally achieve what you want

Total peace
No problems
No more torment
You're free of the world

 

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