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A Drop in the Ocean

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CREATIVE WRITING
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PANDEMIC
i can't move
packed in all sides
surrounded by others
identical to me
i can not find me
i do not know me
i can't move.
a drop in the ocean.

my mind is not inside me
if it was, would i even be able to tell?
is my mind my own?
are our minds identical?
i can not find me
i do not know me
i can't move.
a drop in the ocean.

lying cheating stealing
it's all the same
laughing smiling crying
variations of the above
laughter is stolen from others
smiling is a lie through the teeth
crying is cheating on strength.

is that my thought?
am i real?
are you me?
packed in all sides
surrounded by others
identical to me
i can not find me
i do not know me
i can not move.
a drop in the ocean.

 

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