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I Hope She Feels What I Feel

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I Hope She Feels What I Feel
Astro25
Whyville Poet

Hey, I'm Astro25, artist and poet extraordinare. In the past few weeks, I've written a few poems about someone at school. Sorry to others if this offends you. I hope not. Well, I don't have the guts to tell her or give her these poems but she goes on Whyville sometimes and, well, I hope you feel what I feel...

Angel

I can always count on you,
For better or for worse
To make me feel better like magic or a curse
With beauty as yours, who needs a starry night?

For with you around
My heart glows big and bright
Like flying on wings
I can fly and take flight

For no one can put any doubts
That you are an angel
And I wish I could tell you above all the pains and shouts
That I love you and that's all that counts

 

Love at First Sight

I can't say the first time I saw you
I felt happy
But later in years I feel sappy (Arg -- bad poem word)

I know we laugh and talk
And maybe go for a walk
But the truth is
I feel we should be together
Like key and lock

So everyday, I try to make you laugh
To make you feel better
Of your bad test grade in English or math

So don't despair
For if you feel down
Come to me and I shall share
A few laughs fit for a crown
And I shall try to stay by you as long as I can
Till I see your smiles piercing through the air

 

I hope

I know I flirt with you a lot
But that's because I think you're cool
And maybe because I think you're hot
From your glittering eyes to your piercing smile
I don't think I can resist you, even if I try for a while
So now you tell me you're in the mood
To tell me you're in love
Except it's with another dude
So here I am, crushed like I've been chewed
And spit right out towards the blue
So here I hope, that you're happy
So I just want you to know
That I have no chance
And so, just to say
I love you

A few days later
I hope you tell me you changed your mind
And I could have my heart lift again
So just to tell you
I hope you feel happy with him
Until then...

 

Well, I hope you read this; so, until then.

-Astro25
(sorry, I'm not going to write my quote this time)



 

 

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